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Monday 3 December 2012

The Amazing zoo

ONE DAY TWO BEST FRIENDS CALLED MELISSA THE STRONG AND MAIA THE STRONGEST WENT OFF TO SEE SOME ANIMALS. WE WERE SCIENTISTS WHO STUDY ANIMALS.  

THE FIRST ANIMAL THAT WE WENT TO SEE WAS THE GIRAFFE. BUT WHEN WE LOOKED AT HIM OR HER WE SAW IT POOING ALL OVER THE ZOOKEEPER. THE ZOOKEEPER SCREAMED. IT SMELT LIKE WELL, LIKE A ZOO AS ALWAYS. WE SAW HEAPS OF CHICKS AND HENS. THEN IN CAMOUFLAGE WAS A RHINO . IT WAS GOING TO ATTACK US BUT THE DEER WAS KILLED BY IT.

THEN WE WENT TO THE LIONS. MELISSA WAS SCREAMING BECAUSE SHE SAW A CUB.  BUT  THE TIGER CUB WAS HAVING DINNER WHICH WAS THE DEAD DEER. THEN WE WENT TO THE FLAMINGO.   
THEN ONE HAD A SICKNESS CALLED CANCER. IT WAS SO SICK THAT IT STOOD UP THEN IT WAS DEAD. THE ZOOKEEPERS THREW THE ANIMALS AT US. WE GOT A PIN AND GOT SOME BLOOD EXAMPLES.

THEN WE WENT TO THE CHEATERS.

THEY WERE LAZY AND DIDN’T DO ANYTHING.
 

1 comments:

Unknown said...

Kia Orana Maia,

This is an awesome story, Maia. I really like the way you said" Melissa the strong and Maia the strongest". That sentence was very funny.

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